Greetings of the Universe

A beautiful lore, I hope the author doesn't, end the Novel

I'm still on Chapter 10. But I saw the author's announcement, so decided to write a review so we can have more chapters because I'm afraid of getting cliffhanged! Fighting!

Its a pretty solid book. Not alot of grammatical errors which is great. Story is pretty solid, characters are generally interesting. Sometimes the plot can be aggravating, but it makes up for it with good moments.The biggest flaw in the book in my estimation, is the fights. Every detail of the fight is painstakingly described. Now I suppose if that is your thing, you enjoy that and more power to you. However, I find it to be tedious and cumbersome. When you tell the story of a fight to someone you dont describe every tension of the muscles to them, why? Generally because you dont remember, adrenaline blurs the details. The other reason is because the point of the fight is not the fight.A fight is a vehicle by which the story advances, spending half the chapter, sometimes multiple chapters on a fight, actually dulls the tension and lessens the payoff. Make no mistake I recommend the book. Its a good read with good characters, the flaw I raised is one of the few it has so give it a try.

Abel perplexed asked, "What's this?"

Principle Lewis: Yes that was a good match, but I can honestly say that this match I'll keep in mind, its rare that I get to use my "Blair bird shot

I was standing there in the school corridor during recess,waiting for him.Not to mention how badly I had fallen for him more before he did.And yes,he did! He had also fallen in love with me which I didn't imagine even in my seventh heaven.Ok..now coming back to reality,and ooh...he was coming to me,the dark haired person, tall with a strikingly handsome chiseled face.The very day I saw him I wanted to be in his arms...more than he wanted.

"It can't be..." Kimie muttered in disbelief.

"I never gave you permission to open my public mailbox[13]."